|OBEY YOUR MASTER! MASTER!|
Transformation (Critique requested)I looked into the shadows of the dark room that was riddled with cobwebs. My mom told me to stay out of the room but that only made my mind more curious as to what she wanted to keep from me. I turned on my flashlight and shined it upon the room's very damp and old construction. The smell that was absorbed in the walls would make anyone's nose hairs die upon contact and the boards creaked and sounded like they would collapse in on themselves at any moment. As I continued deeper into the room, I heard a whisper that sent a shiver down my spine. "Get out..."Transformation (Critique requested) by ~SonicAmp
I turned quickly around only to see nothing but a shelf of old novelties. I backed up slowly as the voice continued to echo, "Get out...get out..."
I froze with fear as I felt my hairs on my neck stand up on end and the voice got closer to me. As it got closer, the floor boards creaked louder and louder. "Get out....get out..."
But just as fast as the voice came, it disappeared into a bone chilling silence with nothing but the sounds